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Friday, May 17, 2013

Cleaning House

As the title says, I'm tying the loose ends:

Ten Little Gator Eggs
  1. No response from President Lauri Hornik of Penguin Group. Considered no interest.
  2. No response from the Fogelman Agency. Considered no interest.
  3. No response from the Jennifer De Chiara Literary Agency. Considered no interest.
Family Share articles
Someday I'll have a secret garden just like these.
Suggestions to help you and your family get through the tough times.
Let thy child's first lesson be obedience, and the second will be what thou wilt.
- Benjamin Franklin

I'm working on an article discussing chastity. I'm also working on lesson 8. If you remember, it's about the Everglades. I'm writing an article about controlled burns. It's coming together nicely. I'm still reading about Bigfoot. I almost decided I had enough information. I'm glad I didn't stop reading. I've come across some really interesting information.

I'll be on vacation the first week in June helping my parents move back into their home. If you remember, their previous home was destroyed in Hurricane Irene and it's finally been rebuilt and almost ready for them to move back in.

Having more fun than one ought to reading, writing, submitting, researching and getting published.

Wednesday, May 1, 2013

It's been too long

I seemed to have fallen off the bike and it's been easier to stay off then get back on. Everyday I see this blog and think I need to....then move on. It's time I let you know what's going on. There is so much, I hope I don't miss anything important.

I have been reading Bigfoot books this past month and collecting information for a character in an upcoming children's book. Haven't found a title, but I do have a short outline. I'm thinking this will be a middle grade, short novel.

So many stories going on in my head, my book of titles is getting full. I really need to write instead of coming up with ideas.

Speaking of writing, here are a few articles I've written for familyshare.com since my last update:

This article contains some great safety items to keep in your car. Since Thom, my husband, is a mechanic we've always traveled with our car full of safety items. Many times these have been used and I've been thankful for their presence.
I'm sure this is why our marriage has lasted this long. When one looks past the here and now and takes on an eternal perspective, life becomes less tangled when you remove the stupid stuff.
I love to garden, but I find as I'm getting older it's harder to bend that low. I found raised garden beds to be the answer.
These ideas and many more have saved the day in our household when we couldn't go outside. Some were even great homeschooling projects/aids.

Four more are in the writing-editing process.

I've submitted a couple of articles to our local newspaper and have not had them successfully published. Will continue doing so when I find something locally interesting. If they had time to give me feedback, I might know where I'm going wrong. I do read their articles and try to emulate them, but I must not be doing well enough. They are interested in another 'stringer' so I know it's not because they don't want articles.

I received back assignment 7. It still needs a lot of work. Will have to do that later in the year. Working on Assignment 8. I'm writing about the Everglades. My instructor felt there is so much out there that I need to find a unique story. I think I found it. Will let you know as it progresses.

We were on vacation last week. We went to Inverness, Florida with the Florida Land Rover Club. We took lots of pictures. Can't wait to see them on the computer. I bought a Canon Rebel for my husband at Christmas from a pawn shop and it didn't come with the disk. I tried to download the drivers at the Canon site, but it didn't work. Ours is an older one and uses CF for its storage. We seem to go through readers as the pins bend so easily. I'm waiting for another reader to get here. I bought one that states "no-bend pins." Hopefully this is true. I know there's an eBook in the pictures we took. Or, at least I hope there is.

I found another site, GrammarBase, to help me with my articles. The only thing I don't like is its constant request to dumb down my articles. I understand people want to read at the 4th - 7th grade level, but I feel they should be raising the bar, not dropping it, by reading at a higher level. Anyway, I'll do as recommended as I want my articles to sell. However, I may not be so lenient with my books. Not sure yet as I know I'm nichy already.

Don't forget these sites when writing articles and even novels if you want to prevent plagarism, check grammar and readability:

 Having more fun than one ought to reading, writing, submitting, researching and getting published.

Thursday, March 21, 2013

Book review and updates


My article, "Marriage and the moon: Both have phases," is now published at the familyshare.com website. "Don't let car trouble leave you stranded on the side of the road" is done in editing and is waiting publication. "Prepare for your marriage and not your wedding" is in editing. I'm working on a few more articles and will update you when they are on paper and no longer in my head.

I've finished reading "The Drylands" by Mary Rosenblum. Here's my promised review.



There has not been rain for years and the world has dried up. Crops raised on freshwater, fed by soaker hoses, struggle to remain alive each day along with their human caretakers. Crops raised on saltwater provide a food source at a cost that destroys the land and damages their custodians. Freshwater is piped and micro managed by the Army Corps of Engineers.
Voltaire, a young Corp officer is transferred to The Dallas and is given charge of the Columbia Riverbed Pipeline. He’s thrown in the middle of a struggle between the people of The Dallas and the Corp. Having been through the water war in Chicago, Voltaire is not interested in a repeat. The Coalition, a group of farmers which includes Dan Greely, is accused of sabotaging the pipeline and killing members of the Corp including the previous CO Colonel Hastings.
Nita Montoya and Jeremy Barlow, mutants of the times or the next generation of humans, fear discovery and try to remain at the outskirts of the struggle only to find themselves deeply involved.
Rosenblum weaves these unlikely partners and the damaged Earth into a spellbinding story that is difficult to put down. I really wanted to read this straight through, but life got in the way. Her vivid descriptions and credible characters makes “The Drylands” a must read.

I will be starting "The Ghost Man" by Roger Hobbs and "Beyonders: A World Without Heroes" by Brandon Mull soon.

I know I'm supposed to be writing a short story with you but I'm not as fast as I thought I would be with all the assignments for familyshare.com and my writing course. I'm working on assignment 7. It is due the end of this month. I really want to get it out and on it's way. Then I'll put greater efforts on the short story.

 Happy reading, writing, submitting, researching and getting published.

Thursday, March 14, 2013

Wow, talk about busy and writer's block

I haven't had time, nor the desire, to write for a couple of weeks. Puts a damper on my writing for familyshare.com and for our story we're writing together.

Here's an update:

Received a rejection letter from Peachtree Publishers. Good news is I don't have to wait until August for their response as they responded quickly. Also the submission to Albert Whitman & Company has expired, so I'm considering it a no as well. I think I'm going to find my own illustrator and self-publish. "Ten Little Gator Eggs" is publishable and I'm not finding it a home nor an agent.

My second article, "Marriage and the Moon: Both have phases" has been accepted at the familyshare.com website. I'll let you know when it's published. "Don't get stuck on the side of the road" has been submitted and is waiting approval. I'm almost done and ready to submit "Prepare for your marriage, not your wedding."

Let's write a story

My research indicates the character I've chosen isn't considered an alien from outer space, but I think I can still swing it. There's no proof it's not either. I'm working up it's character profile and will have it here soon.

How are you doing with your story? Keep at it and it'll fall in line on the paper or in your computer.

Stealing paragraphs and chapters with the book "The Drylands" by Mary Rosenblum. Will review here as soon as I'm done. Not much reading time, but this book is really hard to put down.


Happy reading, writing, submitting, researching and getting published.

Monday, February 25, 2013

My first published article as a freelance author

How to raise kids who keep the rules is up and running. If you like it, please fb share and like, twitter, google and pin from the site. It's important this is done from the site for the authors involved. This is the first of many articles that I expect to be published. Thank you for supporting me as an author.

My books are coming in and I'm busy reading through them to decide if this character will be a great alien for my short story. I'm also reading short stories by John Geddes. I love the way his short stories as so tight and hope to learn from reading his. 

Doing the end zone dance with my first published article.

Happy reading, writing, submitting, researching and getting published.

Friday, February 22, 2013

'Let's Write a Short Story'

I know I  said we'd check in weekly, but Sundays are not necessarily a good day for that so I'm going to check in now and try to keep the check ins on Fridays or Saturdays.

Let's Write a Short Story! by Joe Bunting has placed a challenge before us and I'm going to take it. Here's what I've done so far:
  • I've set up the parts
    •  Character has a problem
    • Character tries to solve the problem several times
    • Character has success or failure
I have two main and one secondary character. The story will take place in the Florida Everglades and involves a crashed space pod. Within the pod is the prince of the planet (not yet named) who is saved and hidden by a recluse who lives off the land in the glades. This alien is a familiar part of folklore, so I've checked out several books at the library to update myself on what we know. Hopefully next week I'll feel confident enough that this will work as my alien and I'll let you know who the alien is.

What's your story about? Do you have your characters and storyline thought out? If not, it's not too late. I'll update again next week with the progress of the character development and storyline progress.

I received my teachers response to my hurricane story. She has some really great ideas. I'm going to set it aside for now since I'm busy getting my feet wet with the freelance position. My next assignment (number 7) is due the end of March. She okayed my revising my story, The Power and the Glory. I've been allotted a few more words, so I think I'm going to attempt Creative Nonfiction again. I'll pull out the book, Writing Creative Nonfiction by Carolyn Forche and Philip Gerard and refresh my memory.

Looks like I'm going to be pretty busy these next few weeks.

My first assignment for the freelance job is done and waiting for publication. The second is still in editing and I'm waiting for approval of the third and working on submitting a query for numbers four and five. I'll let you know as soon as it's up at the FamilyShare.com website.

In the meantime, happy reading, researching, writing, revising, and submitting.


Sunday, February 17, 2013

What's slowing down your writing career?

Right now it's my chihuahua, Meiko, demanding his twenty-minute double handed massage.


Here we are on one of his adventures as Inspector Meiko Luv.

When I became interested in writing, I read a book, Kitchen Privileges: A Memoir by Mary Higgins Clark. Basically she stated her writing needed a proper education and experience. So for the past six years I've been gaining an education, not all formal, and looking back at my life's experiences and gaining more. As you read my previous posts you can see that I've managed to publish a few stories and articles. Am I done learning? Not yet. I'm about half-way through my writing course with Long Ridge Writers Group and intend to continue some sort of formal writing until I feel comfortable. Which, as you may find in the website, Make a Living Writing, this may not ever come to fruition.

As recommended, I'm reading a couple of elemental books that remind me of elementary and high school. The Elements of Style by William Strunk, Jr. and E.B. White and Essentials of English: A practical handbook covering all the rules of English grammar by Vincent F. Hopper, Cedric Gale, Ronald C. Foote and revised by Benjamin W. Griffith.

I'm also looking through blogs and reading other author's experiences. Hopefully, the same as you are doing now. I've come across a website that intrigues me. Make a Living Writing. Together we can glean important hints and writing necessities to further our writing careers.

I think it's time for a challenge. I've read the book, Let's Write a Short Story! by Joe Bunting. I'm ready to take his challenge. Are you? The first thing we need to do is choose the story and/or title. I'm writing down ideas, creating the character(s) and direction I'd like the story to take. Of course, it'll, in the end, be the responsibility of the character(s) to tell me the direction, but if I have an idea the character(s) will follow or push hard for their story to be told correctly. So, in a week, I'll post the story information as I see it and hopefully you will too, either on this site or on your own, it doesn't matter. What matters is that we're going to write a short story. We'll continue to update progress reports weekly until the story is published.

Recap. Live slows down your career. Most often we write at home and forget to schedule writing time. Yes, you can write at home, but you mustn't allow home-life to get in the way. Have a place that is exclusively for writing and a time or amount of words you want to write per day. Start small and work up to your desired amount. If it seems too much, be willing to adjust it or allow more time for writing. If you want to make enough money to not have to work outside the home, then your home office needs to have regular hours for writing. If your schedule doesn't permit, make sure you're finding the time to write the amount of words you want per day, but don't bite too deep into your sleeping time. Your writing will suffer. Consider part-time at first if you find other things getting in the way. Be careful not to over schedule your self with outside activities. Remember, your writing is priority after your spouse and family.

Education. Few are born able to write perfectly. You need to know the basics and then gain experience. Read, read and read some more. This will help your writing style. Follow other authors at their websites, blogs, Facebook and other sites. Glean from them writing essentials so that your writing improves. Take an online or local course. Many local writing groups offer courses as well. Never stop learning. I strengthen my understanding of subjects I'm writing about by reading books, short stories, webpages and blogs.

Fear of rejection. In a previous blog post, May 2012, I wrote about using contests to increase ones chances of getting out of the slush pile. Submissions, even when the answer is 'not interested, get's you toward your 'I'd like to publish this story.' Authors must submit and get the nos to earn the yes'. So submit and don't forget the value of contests. And if they offer critiques, pay the extra to learn what they think of your piece and learn from the experts.

Write, read, revise and submit. It's important. Take the challenge and write a short story with me.

Happy reading, writing, revising, submitting and waiting.