Assignment 2 is back

"You had a great opening, showing us your main character in action, then on page 2 you introduced the tension that all good stories must have, and you had a short, pithy ending that left the reader with no doubt about the growth in the main character. Absolutely terrific!!

And she gave me some great recommendations for parts that I wasn't sure how to fix.

A great boost for my ego, gotta be careful it doesn't get too large.

Taking it easy today. Picking up around the store and thinking about some stories that have surfaced requesting my time. One I'm particularly interested in pursuing will be a children's picture book.

Happy writing.